Tuesday, August 09, 2005

An Exquisite Corpse in the Street

IN
She tossed their conversation onto asphalt
Careless of that misamic stink
wafting, creeping back in
easily climbing
thick summer morning's wet breath
tar tints her lips
poisons her song

OUT (line breaks mine)
poisons back tints asphalt
She thick lips that
of stink
conversation in morning's wet climbing summer
onto tossed wafting, tar her song
breath misamic creeping Careless their
her easily



see the exquisite corpse

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