Monday, April 08, 2002

Fruits of an evening workshop with poet Scott Bentley, deemed fit to be published here lest they die.

Given words thusly, one at a time by each:
once script spleen velocity falling stuck up jake closed lonely flop peace shadow sky beer

Apportioned thus by myself:
(punctuation non-existant due to not having been written)

Once script
spleed velocity
falling stuck
up jake closed lonely
flop peace
shadow sky
beer

Apportioned thus in conjunction with Allison:
(as if we could ever pin down the finer points)

Once.
scriptspleen,
velocity falling stuck.
UP, Jake, closed lonely flop.
     Peace
Shadow
slow   skybeer

Original clip:

"The police have been real-
ly inconsistent with what
they are saying," Pike said.
"Some of them have just said
to be careful and left the kids
alone, but others say the
go-peds are against the law
and tell the kids they will be
thrown in jail if they see
them riding them again."


thusly chopped

"The police have been real-ly inconsistent
with what they are saying," Pike said.
"Some of them have
just said
to be careful and left
the kids
          alone
, but others say
the go-peds are against
the law and tell
the kids
they will be thrown
in jail if they
see them riding the again."

again from the end

".again
them riding them see
they
if jail in thrown be
will they
kids
the tell and law
the against are go-peds
the say others
but, alone kids
the left and careful
be to said just
have them
of Some" .said
Pike ",saying are they
what with inconsistent
real-ly been have police The"

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